Figurative Language

LI: to use descriptive language in a narrative text.

This week I have been learning a lot about figurative language like metaphors,personification,similes and onomatopoeia. These make your story more fun and more exciting to read. I also enjoy writing because it lets your imagination run wild. Also can anyone find a piece of figurative language?

Writing editing

L.I. To write a narrative paragraphs using  Topic sentences, details and concluding sentences.

Today Te Ika A Maui had take screenshots of our narratives from last term. We took screenshots of before and after editing our narratives. We used TEE to separate the different sections (TEE stands for title, event and ending.) We also read an example called The Invasion written by Jenny Eather's Writing Fun Website