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Tuesday 27 March 2018

The Tunnel


Today I have finished my 5 - 7 - 10 writing about the tunnel. Before we wrote our setting descriptions, we learnt about all the different literary devices and how they make our writing more powerful. We also looked at mentor text that included all different pieces of literary devices. Then it was writing time. I really enjoy doing 5 - 7 - 10 writing because you can be creative and very enthusiastic. Click here for my piece of writing.

6 comments:

  1. Hello Jeremiah,
    What an outstanding blog post from you. The image you've added into your blog post looks amazing. I also like the way you added powerful words into your 5- 7 - 10 writing which made it more intriguing. Next time you shouldn't centre your writing, but everything else looks great. Did you enjoy writing about this image?
    Nice Work.

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    1. Hi Mele, thank you for your positive and constructive criticism and I will take your advice into consideration. I enjoy writing so I was not surprise that I enjoyed writing about the image.

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