I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Ms Kirkpatrick and Mrs Anderson.
Tuesday, 30 October 2018
Trapped - 5-7-10 Writing
Today I really enjoyed writing a narrative because it gave our group a break from writing explanations. I have written a story about a woman who lives in an asylum because she is mentally ill. I wrote about what is causing her all the pain and what she has to live in everyday. I chose the photo 'Trapped' because I found that I could change the story by saying she was trapped in her own mind. It also gave me flexibility as I could choose how the characters will resolve problems and how the story will end up being like. Click here for my explanation 'the Trapped.'
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Jeremiah,
Trapped,
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