I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Ms Kirkpatrick and Mrs Anderson.
Friday, 26 August 2016
The Cat-pyramid Poem
L.I. To use a range of vocabulary to create a picture in the readers head.
During writing we learnt about adjectives, nouns, adverbs and verbs. If you don't know the green is adjectives, nouns are blue, red are verbs and brown are adverbs. My poem is about an old, mysterious cat. If you want to know more you have to read the poem and I hope I made a picture in you're head with the words I have used.
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Great poem, Jeremiah. It makes me wonder why an old cat would be pouncing off the roof, and where it got the strength from.
ReplyDeleteHow could you extend this poem?