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Wednesday 12 July 2017

The Landing Of Shag Point

This is my first completed activity of Native Aoteroa. For this activity we had to create a poem about how we would have felt if we were one of the first people to land on Shag Point before New Zealand became New Zealand. Click here for my poem.

6 comments:

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  2. Hi Jeremiah. I really like your poem. I like how you have linked it to a Google Doc. You have written a great poem, keep it up.

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  3. Hello Jeremiah, I like how you put a link to your document that had your poem on. You have written one of the best poems I have seen. Keep up the awesome work.

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  4. Hey Jeremiah
    I like how you put your poem on a google doc, and you linked to your blog post. Keep up the superb work Jeremiah!
    Daniel

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  5. Hi Jeremiah!

    Wow, I am really impressed with you poem! You must've spent lots of time thinking about the vocabulary and rhyming couplets you would use. Well done Jeremiah, it's a really beautiful poem!

    Nicky

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  6. Hi Jeremiah,
    Your poem is awesome. I like that you have put you poem on a google doc. Well Done on completing this activity.
    Eric

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